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First Page Feedback – Turn to Me

Here’s a Kiss/Presents entry from NLH–it’s definitely catchy! 🙂 Katherine Holt hated these things. After a performance, all she wanted […]

Posted on: August 5, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Aquila

We’re going to have the occasional two posts a day as I’ve gotten some good responses from editors! Here’s a […]

Posted on: August 4, 2014
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First Page Feedback – House of Tears

Here’s a suitably atmospheric Shivers entry from @MaggiAndersen! England, 1920 The wind built to a crescendo, and with a moan, […]

Posted on: August 4, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Murder Most Unusual

Ooh, a great title and compelling opening! 🙂 Thanks, Michelle Somers (@msomerswriter), for an exciting start to the day! They […]

Posted on: August 1, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Leaving Louisiana

Alison sent this in without a genre chosen–it’s a moody, intriguing opening for sure. Either YA or New Adult perhaps…. […]

Posted on: July 31, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Aflame

This if for Harlequin E Historical Romance. SJ Cameron opens the story with definite action!  A moan. He paused on […]

Posted on: July 29, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Animal Instincts

Here’s a Superromance submission. Lauren James knows pets are always appealing!  Straddling a sexy hunk of a man on the […]

Posted on: July 28, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Trust

Oh, we do love some space opera stories! Here’s an intriguing one by Maya Aodhan (@aesa_K) that is definitely out […]

Posted on: July 24, 2014
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First Page Feedback – Ink Slapped

Another HQN first page! @Authoramjones (A.M. Jones) has sent in a page with a very intriguing title….    It’s only […]

Posted on: July 23, 2014
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Addison Fox on archetypal characters

  Addison Fox had written nearly fifteen titles before coming to Harlequin Romantic Suspense with her Steele family series! As a […]

Posted on: July 23, 2014